tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post105719537283578337..comments2023-06-28T16:33:17.006+01:00Comments on Pen's Random Jottings: Rosa Frei & Poetry Challenge from One Stop PoetryPennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-7987330013828047272011-05-03T20:43:41.697+01:002011-05-03T20:43:41.697+01:00Solid, emotive-but-balanced work.Solid, emotive-but-balanced work.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-83636445609995488242011-05-02T18:42:05.762+01:002011-05-02T18:42:05.762+01:00lovely.you captured her gaze perfectlylovely.you captured her gaze perfectlyIsabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16630181168510791132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-56143899350081934782011-05-02T17:31:44.500+01:002011-05-02T17:31:44.500+01:00brilliant response to the challenge. you are talen...brilliant response to the challenge. you are talented.Celestial Dreamzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11665499902779022498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-35121516719231623192011-05-02T02:50:57.698+01:002011-05-02T02:50:57.698+01:00Beautiful...love how you picked up the haunted loo...Beautiful...love how you picked up the haunted look and protection in his eyes...Brilliant! Loved this...lorelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17875619862193834212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-91493736412269372011-05-02T00:10:48.065+01:002011-05-02T00:10:48.065+01:00'shrouded against' but
'Protection, to...'shrouded against' but<br />'Protection, too, in those hard eyes,<br />that judge’s gaze so sharp and clear'<br />insightful Pen of this character image.<br />~ Lovely construction of words and insightfulness ~ Lib ~ @Libithinalibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-20065668372549614782011-05-01T21:06:36.444+01:002011-05-01T21:06:36.444+01:00Really nice use of words -- "dessicating deat...Really nice use of words -- "dessicating death" -- and the extracting of so much from his eyes. Well done.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-31674491593746975532011-05-01T20:48:34.827+01:002011-05-01T20:48:34.827+01:00I concur with all the above comments. Great comman...I concur with all the above comments. Great command of technique in the construction of your piece but more than that, an incisive exploration of the character in the image.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-40419768696177068942011-05-01T20:44:52.096+01:002011-05-01T20:44:52.096+01:00pen this is a delicious look into those eyes...tig...pen this is a delicious look into those eyes...tight write...which pierces through soft urban lies<br />and sees the shamed and trembling fear...my fav lines...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-61976476463956026462011-05-01T20:40:52.682+01:002011-05-01T20:40:52.682+01:00nice reflection of the mood of the picturenice reflection of the mood of the pictureJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-58005324013837667382011-05-01T19:50:34.447+01:002011-05-01T19:50:34.447+01:00Superb and wonderfully matching the mood of the im...Superb and wonderfully matching the mood of the image! Thank you very much for sharing these words!Rosahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14793221093082168759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-58095766148379766792011-05-01T19:09:47.466+01:002011-05-01T19:09:47.466+01:00Thank you.Thank you.Pennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-64168678638546245602011-05-01T18:58:39.562+01:002011-05-01T18:58:39.562+01:00Pen this is a perfectly wonderful write. The archi...Pen this is a perfectly wonderful write. The architecture and flow, rhyme scheme all spot on and your message is breathtaking! ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-73677088956834275952011-05-01T18:51:05.895+01:002011-05-01T18:51:05.895+01:00Pen, you had me with the first line of "flens...Pen, you had me with the first line of "flensing breath." Wow. You capture the emotional complexity of that deep, intense stare. Wonderfully written challenge response!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.com