tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post1675387018229482576..comments2023-06-28T16:33:17.006+01:00Comments on Pen's Random Jottings: One Stop SundayPennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-28682548424391901452011-02-21T09:20:04.752+00:002011-02-21T09:20:04.752+00:00I love the crescendo building to the close. Master...I love the crescendo building to the close. Masterful writing!JackAZ Photographyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08010316599877217312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-87688941547075975932011-02-21T04:23:51.315+00:002011-02-21T04:23:51.315+00:00"fiddling out his woes". enjoyed the who..."fiddling out his woes". enjoyed the whole feel of the two stanzas you wrote.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-37985989051537006782011-02-20T22:33:21.277+00:002011-02-20T22:33:21.277+00:00Punning is allowed! Loved the tanka and that you w...Punning is allowed! Loved the tanka and that you were brave enough to go form on this great photo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-20753546758403518392011-02-20T21:14:28.883+00:002011-02-20T21:14:28.883+00:00your Tanka is well done.But puns,really. OK I gues...your Tanka is well done.But puns,really. OK I guess that's allowed.richardpiszczekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05568291703869865416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-24964977804975695582011-02-20T21:13:23.725+00:002011-02-20T21:13:23.725+00:00I keep thinking my poem would have taken a complet...I keep thinking my poem would have taken a completely different form if I realized the violinist was wearing a Darth Vader costume. <br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2011/02/oh-to-have-the-courage-a-poem-.html" rel="nofollow"> My take. </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-714211149309562652011-02-20T17:48:23.457+00:002011-02-20T17:48:23.457+00:00i like your tankas - and it really looks like he&#...i like your tankas - and it really looks like he's fiddling out his woes..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-60921125185907010362011-02-20T17:46:35.486+00:002011-02-20T17:46:35.486+00:00That was so cool of you to say thank you in the mi...That was so cool of you to say thank you in the middle of your poem. Jack has allowed us access to so many fantastic images that next week promises to be excellent too... Love how your poetry builds to the challenge of the norm in your final stanza, emphasizing his strong emotions.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-37346303619762489602011-02-20T16:55:18.270+00:002011-02-20T16:55:18.270+00:00Oh sweet. You did Tanka. Interesting effect, how t...Oh sweet. You did Tanka. Interesting effect, how the imaginary sounds combine with the words to impart another emotional layer.Richard G. Crocketthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00706814593794196558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-36654739698177729692011-02-20T13:18:15.944+00:002011-02-20T13:18:15.944+00:00LOL! Way to go Penny! ~.^LOL! Way to go Penny! ~.^Helena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.com