tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post1807501318558842339..comments2023-06-28T16:33:17.006+01:00Comments on Pen's Random Jottings: One Stop Poetry Form – Prosody Week TwoPennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-53682865235054317202011-04-27T15:07:27.501+01:002011-04-27T15:07:27.501+01:00picture, not pictur,
I forgot to eat my breakfas...picture, not pictur, <br /><br />I forgot to eat my breakfast today.<br />bless you,<br />bless me too,Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-82979181311967908682011-04-27T15:06:29.035+01:002011-04-27T15:06:29.035+01:00a lovely picutr your words painted here, peace.
bl...a lovely picutr your words painted here, peace.<br />bless your day.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-9206280169913022042011-04-26T22:50:43.604+01:002011-04-26T22:50:43.604+01:00I know nothing about the prosody forms, as I am tr...I know nothing about the prosody forms, as I am trying them too, but your poem Penny just lights up the page !<br />Sorry I havent been around much, working A LOT and didnt have service for three days, trying really hard to catch up !<br />HUGS<br />JL&BJL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-45885800522125189152011-04-26T09:47:24.301+01:002011-04-26T09:47:24.301+01:00Like that.Neat.Like that.Neat.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-82407825505524171182011-04-25T21:15:54.310+01:002011-04-25T21:15:54.310+01:00Penny this is jut wonderful!!! drinks again from F...Penny this is jut wonderful!!! drinks again from Freyr’s bounty. ♥ ஆεlεɳaHelena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-90483001976318009402011-04-25T19:20:09.964+01:002011-04-25T19:20:09.964+01:00Oh dear. I didn't mean at the end of the poem...Oh dear. I didn't mean at the end of the poem on the spondees, I meant perhaps at the end of a couple of lines. Sorry.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-34153239817677156972011-04-25T19:17:39.446+01:002011-04-25T19:17:39.446+01:00Just wonderful! Wish I could have come up with so...Just wonderful! Wish I could have come up with something as poetic, beautiful and joyous as this. But by the end of last night, my creative juices (unlike my draining sinuses as result of massive allergies this season) had dried up. Or perhaps the one set merely replaced the other. <br /><br />I would say these were all trochees except maybe ?? for a couple of spondees at the end. EXCELLENT (read that as JEALOUS). GayBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-63262847188590825942011-04-25T15:58:19.607+01:002011-04-25T15:58:19.607+01:00it is a very peaceful verse you create there at th...it is a very peaceful verse you create there at the end of the drought, it left me light and joyful...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com