tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post4602308891806491954..comments2023-06-28T16:33:17.006+01:00Comments on Pen's Random Jottings: Triolet?Pennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-88138286927468875782011-03-16T01:18:12.583+00:002011-03-16T01:18:12.583+00:00I loved your tweak on the "A refrain" wh...I loved your tweak on the "A refrain" when you entered the second to last line in "Hey! Hayfever!" Very Cute.rmpWritingshttp://dontopendontthrowaway.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-41869637200345416202011-03-15T19:37:48.175+00:002011-03-15T19:37:48.175+00:00Beautiful write!Beautiful write!Short Poemshttp://marinelareka.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-88810021333543349632011-03-15T00:09:16.161+00:002011-03-15T00:09:16.161+00:00You captured not only the triolet but my reaction ...You captured not only the triolet but my reaction to spring as well. About to get worse as I head south tomorrow. The pollen is out ..beautiful but hard to see when eyes are streaming. Well done here!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-8341089044208301612011-03-14T12:31:42.953+00:002011-03-14T12:31:42.953+00:00Hey Pen and thank you ever so much for having a go...Hey Pen and thank you ever so much for having a go! You're almost almost within grasp here! Lovely refrains, and the iambs are very close also...let me show you using your work::<br /><br />One basic truth is I am me A refrain<br />Of that I think I’m sure at last same B refrain<br />While in my life I’m all at sea a rhyme<br />One basic truth is I am me.A refrain<br /><br />No room for doubt there cannot be adjusted a<br />That existentialist flame b rhyme<br />One basic truth is - I am me. A refrain<br />And that ‘I think, I am’ is last. B refrain altered for irony<br /><br />And with very few changes, you're absolutely there! Triolet works for you :) Don't give up trying, you did such a good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-41559842457736890362011-03-14T12:30:16.814+00:002011-03-14T12:30:16.814+00:00awe Penny do you suffer with hayfever?? that would...awe Penny do you suffer with hayfever?? that would just kill me !!<br />I love both of your triolets, you are a wonder to me how well you pick up the forms and run with them... Well done!JL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.com