tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post6569306921486696284..comments2023-06-28T16:33:17.006+01:00Comments on Pen's Random Jottings: Pennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-7332109941167432662011-02-28T20:15:52.337+00:002011-02-28T20:15:52.337+00:00Solid work, good end-line (summed it up nicely).Solid work, good end-line (summed it up nicely).Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-66452112251965336722011-02-28T02:34:56.021+00:002011-02-28T02:34:56.021+00:00I see that the other commenters loved your finish ...I see that the other commenters loved your finish too. Insightful and elegant.<br /><br />And the other exercise that GIgi wondered about? "Now is the time for good men to come to the aid of their country." (There was an earlier version with "party."Richard G. Crocketthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00706814593794196558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-75186267800291376362011-02-27T19:41:07.958+00:002011-02-27T19:41:07.958+00:00Isn't that so true about life? We discard...a...Isn't that so true about life? We discard...and move on...yet there is magic we gain if we learn to blend the two worlds...now to pass that onto our youth...lorelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17875619862193834212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-14228372046265616802011-02-27T18:18:18.443+00:002011-02-27T18:18:18.443+00:00No ghosts on the old type onnly lack of correction...No ghosts on the old type onnly lack of correction type! Things were a lot less hassle, apart from changing the ribbon which was a bit of a hassle! Ghosts in the modern machine, well I'd pin that on the procrastinating we do on fb and twitter, but then that's just me..mayhap XDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-3249539297091131742011-02-27T17:42:07.599+00:002011-02-27T17:42:07.599+00:00Loved the ghost in modern machines... ghosts of mi...Loved the ghost in modern machines... ghosts of minds pasts also comes to mind. Stories told, words finding their place.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-86963304185973389852011-02-27T16:37:20.856+00:002011-02-27T16:37:20.856+00:00i like the ghost in modern machines..you captured ...i like the ghost in modern machines..you captured well how things have developed...and i'm so glad they did..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-85174501294291337272011-02-27T15:30:25.581+00:002011-02-27T15:30:25.581+00:00but without the typewriter would be have progresse...but without the typewriter would be have progressed to there...nice bit of evolution you penned...penBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-6662019923738996482011-02-27T15:11:37.170+00:002011-02-27T15:11:37.170+00:00I was looking for a particular quote I liked best ...I was looking for a particular quote I liked best and realized I want to quote the whole poem before settling on the following from the second half, "But I am an ancestor of the print<br />That floods the modern electronic age,<br />The lettered keys on my front give hint<br />That my descendants have reached a new stage." A literary/technological spirit that speaks in evolving terms. Great write.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-79219976930430465062011-02-27T14:41:10.074+00:002011-02-27T14:41:10.074+00:00Oh I love your poem, so true 'discarded as you...Oh I love your poem, so true 'discarded as you move to better things."<br /><br />Thanks for your visit to my blog today, I had forgotten the sentence exercise "the quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog." I knew there was another one, but my old mind couldn't think of it until your visit. "Memories may be beautiful... and yet... what's to painful to remember, we simply tend to forget." Gigi Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08092019687497845746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-84846633220627336572011-02-27T13:12:21.716+00:002011-02-27T13:12:21.716+00:00I agree, Love that line also...Ghost...in ...moder...I agree, Love that line also...Ghost...in ...modern...machines...Great write Pen ~.^ Helena ♥Helena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-85427924669260553042011-02-27T11:34:02.555+00:002011-02-27T11:34:02.555+00:00Ghost in modern machines - love that line!Ghost in modern machines - love that line!Another Man's Dreamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04453440630317550594noreply@blogger.com