tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post8718017320997776855..comments2023-06-28T16:33:17.006+01:00Comments on Pen's Random Jottings: For Monday at Onestop poetryPennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-17549526675067100792011-07-03T02:31:22.444+01:002011-07-03T02:31:22.444+01:00brilliant, love the flying/dynamic imagery.
Join ...brilliant, love the flying/dynamic imagery.<br /><br />Join Poets Rally today,<br />We value your talent.<br />Cheers.<br />Happy July 4TH!Hyde Park Poetry Palacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-81367501432947280572011-06-21T16:57:33.470+01:002011-06-21T16:57:33.470+01:00'jewels' found in unwanted places ~ a grea...'jewels' found in unwanted places ~ a great write Pen ~ so glad you were able to get the right help when you needed ~ Lib ~ @Libithina<br />Midsummer wishes xlibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-41501902527134821442011-06-21T09:13:07.604+01:002011-06-21T09:13:07.604+01:00you started it perfectly, I have always found graf...you started it perfectly, I have always found graffiti, wall paintings quite inspirational, and yes some of them can indeed adorn the generations to come.ALIVE aLwaYshttp://alivealways.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-35055559293720202282011-06-21T03:37:16.117+01:002011-06-21T03:37:16.117+01:00Great prompt response ...I think the line "ca...Great prompt response ...I think the line "cankered concrete is the winner!Helena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-54074386437995175782011-06-21T02:49:25.587+01:002011-06-21T02:49:25.587+01:00Nicely penned. I especially like "cankered c...Nicely penned. I especially like "cankered concrete."<br />~brendaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-1125261615439439202011-06-21T02:43:36.267+01:002011-06-21T02:43:36.267+01:00Two birds, a beautiful free verse and prompt all i...Two birds, a beautiful free verse and prompt all in one! Love the end line play of "writers". Great write ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-45534698499001814962011-06-20T21:56:41.783+01:002011-06-20T21:56:41.783+01:00Diamonds among the broken glass. Art where you fin...Diamonds among the broken glass. Art where you find it and how you make it. I suppose the urge is great and there's a fierceness in competition. You certainly capture the tawdriness of having to confront it in unwanted places. Well done.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-46398474530894820922011-06-20T16:37:39.322+01:002011-06-20T16:37:39.322+01:00Cankered concrete masquerading as bling...Cankered concrete masquerading as bling...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-32312859641805175812011-06-20T16:19:42.122+01:002011-06-20T16:19:42.122+01:00Nice to hear good stories about the NHS...hearteni...Nice to hear good stories about the NHS...heartening. I liked your poem from the outset 'There may be jewels here'..and it's so easy for us to walk right past, never taking a second look. Nice write.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.com