tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post333961452207268148..comments2023-06-28T16:33:17.006+01:00Comments on Pen's Random Jottings: Summer Field.Pennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-90278162583444726952011-04-30T03:55:27.160+01:002011-04-30T03:55:27.160+01:00I love me a sonnet, but I can't write one. Lo...I love me a sonnet, but I can't write one. Loved yours!<br /><br />Henry ClemmonsHenry Clemmonshttp://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/04/anonymous-friday-poetically.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-23676069489546800472011-04-30T02:09:20.697+01:002011-04-30T02:09:20.697+01:00A very strong sonnet, quite lyrical as it moves fr...A very strong sonnet, quite lyrical as it moves from whimsy to darkness. Much enjoyed ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-88987503601533042112011-04-29T21:49:00.714+01:002011-04-29T21:49:00.714+01:00Found you on One Shot!
I fail a sonnets, so I lov...Found you on One Shot! <br />I fail a sonnets, so I love reading the poets who can pull it off. I'm going to go with what Brian said...I was into the serenity, and then BAM! Death is everywhere. Nice.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12573663638391382162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-24939144553192034612011-04-29T21:25:00.092+01:002011-04-29T21:25:00.092+01:00A) I dig sonnets. B) I dig poems with twists.
So...A) I dig sonnets. B) I dig poems with twists.<br /><br />So I'm thrilled that not only did you write a sonnet, but you turned an idyllic scene into a brutal episode of nature's carnage.<br /><br />Excellent! :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15515148975353849650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-41231355540060695702011-04-29T21:23:08.218+01:002011-04-29T21:23:08.218+01:00Some very nice phrasing here, and your meter and f...Some very nice phrasing here, and your meter and form enforce the message, the routine of death that's part of life.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-55698744358438927112011-04-29T21:10:05.070+01:002011-04-29T21:10:05.070+01:00wow nice capture of an intense moment...you had me...wow nice capture of an intense moment...you had me all at peace in your description and then, life happened...nice.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-22345007554934126022011-04-28T19:30:47.159+01:002011-04-28T19:30:47.159+01:00to shatter peace as death strikes from the skies.....to shatter peace as death strikes from the skies...I like that...or you could say...to shatter death as peace strikes from the skies...nicely done Penny...I welcome the change!lorelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17875619862193834212noreply@blogger.com