tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post3843826381952277394..comments2023-06-28T16:33:17.006+01:00Comments on Pen's Random Jottings: FloatingPennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-20963256921821532532011-04-11T23:03:37.384+01:002011-04-11T23:03:37.384+01:00Sorry to be so late Penny, no service this morning...Sorry to be so late Penny, no service this morning before work, just got back a bit ago....<br />You express depression and the feelings that go with it very well... I know you suffer with it from time to time... hope you are doing alright!<br />JL&BJL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-79689010813396388002011-04-11T21:34:56.082+01:002011-04-11T21:34:56.082+01:00So powerful and down to the core, Penny
very well ...So powerful and down to the core, Penny<br />very well doneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-9973305556166313822011-04-11T06:06:32.190+01:002011-04-11T06:06:32.190+01:00Strong emotional effect to this. Excellent.Strong emotional effect to this. Excellent.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-71105502308393849872011-04-11T04:19:21.222+01:002011-04-11T04:19:21.222+01:00Excellent. How different are each of the poems on ...Excellent. How different are each of the poems on this picture! Your capture of mood and mind swing seems spot on, even though thankfully it's not something I've personally known. Yet I have often witnessed it and misunderstood it in others.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-3791969349849973932011-04-11T03:30:25.287+01:002011-04-11T03:30:25.287+01:00Love how you related this pic to the realm of ment...Love how you related this pic to the realm of mental illness...and the use of technicolor flares...how others view mental illness or assume the brand...well done!lorelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17875619862193834212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-40332526596888270522011-04-10T19:03:13.747+01:002011-04-10T19:03:13.747+01:00I had intended something light but it went another...<i>I had intended something light but it went another way.</i><br /><br />That's alright. It was well said and it needs to be heard.Amandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293649194823360181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-6721737083965155612011-04-10T18:06:18.326+01:002011-04-10T18:06:18.326+01:00Great take on this prompt... beautiful expression ...Great take on this prompt... beautiful expression of the ups and downs so often straining our daily words. But the muse, she has a mind of her own, leading us down the path to where expression needs to be.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-74565335854994600362011-04-10T16:32:22.198+01:002011-04-10T16:32:22.198+01:00really powerful poem, Penny! great One Shoot!really powerful poem, Penny! great One Shoot!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-56437351499028502842011-04-10T13:53:30.480+01:002011-04-10T13:53:30.480+01:00good editorial of those we often see and pass by o...good editorial of those we often see and pass by on the other side of the street. Nice take.Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-45281027239477574112011-04-10T13:21:59.727+01:002011-04-10T13:21:59.727+01:00mmm... the mood swings...yeah you captured that we...mmm... the mood swings...yeah you captured that well...take your ups cause those downs can be deadlyBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-88210913391166060562011-04-10T12:52:28.721+01:002011-04-10T12:52:28.721+01:00Wow. I think you nailed the, perhaps unspoken, per...Wow. I think you nailed the, perhaps unspoken, perception of manic episodes—the anticipation of fear and potential embarrassment. The come down, or realization, in the final stanza is very revealing. Excellent write for the challenge.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-52507537817200224962011-04-10T09:43:50.910+01:002011-04-10T09:43:50.910+01:00wow...the take on emotional content is more releva...wow...the take on emotional content is more relevant than what i saw.very nice!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08660545422931632039noreply@blogger.com