tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post7068029516156918373..comments2023-06-28T16:33:17.006+01:00Comments on Pen's Random Jottings: For One Shot WednesdayPennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-4088065825752621032011-05-20T05:44:45.266+01:002011-05-20T05:44:45.266+01:00"A viscous slurry of septic dreams "
Wo..."A viscous slurry of septic dreams "<br /><br />Wonderful descriptions! Brilliant!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-36381922911401825912011-05-19T13:13:27.494+01:002011-05-19T13:13:27.494+01:00I also have known the darkness, great description ...I also have known the darkness, great description Penny...Helena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-90846392283341710652011-05-19T11:30:40.001+01:002011-05-19T11:30:40.001+01:00well conveyed sentiments.
you rock!well conveyed sentiments.<br /><br />you rock!Bluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-5297072264659027042011-05-19T06:51:00.620+01:002011-05-19T06:51:00.620+01:00This is sad and broken minds are preceded by broke...This is sad and broken minds are preceded by broken hearts most times....hope it heals and it heals well.budh.aaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-42614281993490671462011-05-19T05:45:18.442+01:002011-05-19T05:45:18.442+01:00Such a vivid description,it describes combat PTSD ...Such a vivid description,it describes combat PTSD so accruately,I would swear that you had served in the military and in combat.Penny you are amazing to say the least.When I came back from Vietnam after my second tour that is how I felt. The world is a cold and lonely place<br /> When the sun sets beyond the sea<br /> And darkness falls upon the land,bring all my fears to me.<br /> The fears of life, of being alone,<br /> In a kingdom this side of the sea.<br /> And a cold wind blows across the land<br /> Chilling my soul,chilling my bones,<br /> Letting me know that I will always will be alone.<br /><br />Wrote that my first night back from Vietnam in 1967.Your poem says what I wanted to say with mine. Thanks Penny.richardpiszczekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05568291703869865416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-14908987524810972152011-05-19T01:48:16.969+01:002011-05-19T01:48:16.969+01:00Dark...well done.Dark...well done.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-70029560801425205712011-05-19T00:54:23.054+01:002011-05-19T00:54:23.054+01:00Great descriptive writing. The darkness is a plac...Great descriptive writing. The darkness is a place I go more often than I care to admit. Very scary for those who know it . Thank you for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-53337939915201717212011-05-18T17:07:31.447+01:002011-05-18T17:07:31.447+01:00I know of the darkness you speak, it comes more of...I know of the darkness you speak, it comes more often than it goes...JL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3880438130642340958.post-58647652659553480052011-05-18T13:13:59.956+01:002011-05-18T13:13:59.956+01:00ugh...very dark...hope rises like bubbles, great v...ugh...very dark...hope rises like bubbles, great visual...i would hope this person the help to get through...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com