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Friday, 20 May 2011

Harvest moon

Dodge is trying her hand at the yadu, to learn more about it pop over to her blog. Dodge Writes.

I think I got it but only JL will tell....

Harvest moon lit
cloud wisps flit by,
stars sit behind;
bright, refined gems,
reminding me you see this sky too.

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5 comments:

  1. JL Dodge21 May 2011 at 04:31

    Yes my friend, This is perfectly exicuted !!

    AND Beautifully worded... double dose of greatness !!

    JL&B

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  2. Hyde Park Poetry Palace21 May 2011 at 19:18

    stunning,
    wow.
    bless your weekend, join us if you can.

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  3. Anonymous23 May 2011 at 01:13

    how sweet.

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  4. Anonymous23 May 2011 at 07:14

    "reminding me you see this sky too."

    a line that really touches the heart when one we love is in another part of the world.

    i'm not familiar with the yadu ~ heading over to Dodge Writes now.

    a really lovely poem!
    dani

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  5. Steve Isaak23 May 2011 at 21:28

    Relatable, connecting end-line work.

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