A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.
Gaseous mixture,
oxygen and nitrogen
with trace carbon dioxide.
Blithely whimsical,
diaphanous and dainty
personified by the sylphs.
I like this style and you used it wisely. Fact and fancy.
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