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Saturday, 2 April 2011

saturday - and Dodges prompt.

Dodge says: Today we ask that you write on a bitter breakup...  the only catch is that you have to do it in 15 words or less.

Seems to lead naturally to a senryu:

Poisonous hard words
toxic feelings, broken vows
love’s explosive death. 

or a haiku:
Love's rotting branches
explode in the freezing air
of parting hatred .
 
 
  
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6 comments:

  1. Bethe772 April 2011 at 18:18

    I think you have truly captured a bitter break up. I like it. I think I have done one of those before. (Smiles)
    Blessings

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  2. Lisa2 April 2011 at 18:44

    Very nice take on the bitter breakup. I enjoyed reading it.

    Lisa
    InspiredbyLisa

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  3. Helena White2 April 2011 at 19:01

    Broken vows indeed..well done!

    ♥ ஆ ~.^

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  4. Gemma Wiseman2 April 2011 at 23:39

    A very descriptive resentation of the sour tensions of a break-up!

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  5. JL Dodge3 April 2011 at 01:07

    Love how you did Haiku and Senryu ! Both are equally great !
    Still thinking on the challenge you gave us, I think I'll get it up tomorrow if that is cool with you !
    ENJOY
    JL&B

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  6. Penny3 April 2011 at 06:49

    Any time JL. I think one needs a month to think about it!

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