Dodge says: Today we ask that you write on a bitter breakup... the only catch is that you have to do it in 15 words or less.
Seems to lead naturally to a senryu:
Poisonous hard words
toxic feelings, broken vows
love’s explosive death.
or a haiku:
Love's rotting branches
explode in the freezing air
of parting hatred .
I think you have truly captured a bitter break up. I like it. I think I have done one of those before. (Smiles)
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Very nice take on the bitter breakup. I enjoyed reading it.
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InspiredbyLisa
Broken vows indeed..well done!
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A very descriptive resentation of the sour tensions of a break-up!
ReplyDeleteLove how you did Haiku and Senryu ! Both are equally great !
ReplyDeleteStill thinking on the challenge you gave us, I think I'll get it up tomorrow if that is cool with you !
ENJOY
JL&B
Any time JL. I think one needs a month to think about it!
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