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Tuesday, 26 April 2011

One Shot Wednesday

Although it is actually still Tuesday in my part of the world....

Following on from Monday and the Prosery work, i has been playing with meters, spondees and trochees.  Possibly the off terror-dactyl if I did but know it, I'm sure Gay will put me right.....

Pop over to one shot Wednesday to see what other people are up to...

Boating.

Dreamy days
sunlit haze
waterways.

Off boating
just floating
and gloating.

Idling by
bright blue sky
hours fly.

No worry
no hurry
no flurry.

Sailing on
troubles gone
peaceful one.


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14 comments:

  1. dustus26 April 2011 at 22:54

    I enjoyed your lyrical wordplay. And look out for those "terror-dactyls!" lol.

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  2. Brian Miller26 April 2011 at 23:22

    nice...i used to spend summers sailing on the piannkitank river...and you captured them well conjuring nice memories...

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  3. Unknown27 April 2011 at 00:04

    A real spoken word flow, I loved the simple joy in this write! ~ Rose

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  4. Anonymous27 April 2011 at 01:03

    We all need something that can relax us...and it sounds like boating is at least one of those beauties for you. No worry, no hurry, no flurry...what a beautiful feeling that must be. So soothing.

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  5. Bethe7727 April 2011 at 01:14

    I need to be on that boat.
    Wonderful I was taken away.
    Thank you
    Blessings

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  6. Anonymous27 April 2011 at 05:47

    "Sailing on
    troubles gone
    peaceful one."

    beautiful! great imagery.

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  7. Anonymous27 April 2011 at 07:25

    Beautiful and light...no worries! Nice.

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  8. Anonymous27 April 2011 at 13:21

    The breeze is warm...

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  9. ayala27 April 2011 at 13:22

    Great imagery...

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  10. S and J27 April 2011 at 15:41

    well chosen words and a holiday mood with the bonus of the feel of water - great

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  11. Unknown27 April 2011 at 16:31

    Beautiful!
    I floated along with you.
    This is how I feel when creating in my garden...
    Here is my One Shot:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/04/27/mourning-melody/

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  12. John (@bookdreamer)27 April 2011 at 19:26

    day start let water shine light bright!

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  13. JL Dodge28 April 2011 at 14:31

    Wow Penny this is so good !!
    Sorry I havent had time to be here more, I've had a very busy week, I will catch up this week end !!
    Thinking of you !
    JL&B

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  14. Unknown3 May 2011 at 03:48

    Makes me want to head out for some Kayaking! :)

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