Our friends at onestop offer up another form for me to massecre today. Come and learn about it here.
Personally, I am not sure if I like it. It seems a bit more like diced prose than poetry to me.
Still, I tend to favour form and that is an arguament that can run and run forever while having all the validity of oil painters fighting watercolourists over which is best. Art is where you find it.
Anyway. Three trys. I hope it isn't three strikes and I am out, lol.
This simple line form
there must lurk some unseen twist
I have failed to grasp.
decked in diamonds
lacily draped on hedgerows
soloist leads in