haiku :
- A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
- A poem written in this form.
Sparkling on the black tarmac,
Sharp shards of impact.
Red stains the low clouds
Early blossoms swirl to ground
Stirred by days last breath.
Grey sky softly weeps
Sunlights rays pierce the blanket
And the rainbow arcs.
I do believe you have nailed Haiku.Once agin your talent shines brightly.
ReplyDeletefirst attempt. how about this
ReplyDelete"Flashing glints of Gold
Gilding through sparkling water
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@ kaljan = very nice!
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ReplyDeletePerfection captures ones soul
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