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Wednesday, 23 February 2011

One Shot Wednesday strikes again

http://onestoppoetry.com/

Any aspiring poet should know this site.
Come to that, so should everyone else!

So here it is again:  http://onestoppoetry.com/

Go take a look.


Todays one shot attempt is a Tanka since we looked at them on Monday.  My brain seems to be stuck.

Trembling rosebud
On the point of opening
 Enfolded in warmth
Pressure, pain, joyful stretching 
The blood red rose bloomed that day.

 
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7 comments:

  1. Brian Miller23 February 2011 at 18:51

    like birth...or our lives...sometimes it takes a little pressure to get us to bloom...very nice.

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  2. Claudia23 February 2011 at 18:53

    oh i like the joyful stretching...towards the sun...nice

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  3. Helena White23 February 2011 at 20:51

    Yes! A joyful morning stretch! I like Pen ~.^

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  4. Rachel Hoyt24 February 2011 at 02:17

    Aaaaaaaahhhhhh. I had to do some joyful stretching after that! Loved it. :)

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  5. signed...bkm24 February 2011 at 05:28

    Oh the Blood Rose....lovely image....bkm

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  6. richardpiszczek24 February 2011 at 07:43

    I think you got it.great tanka

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  7. Susie Swanson24 February 2011 at 18:36

    Beautiful image, I love it!

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