http://www.napowrimo.net/ and the challenge is:
"
"to write a poem that stretches your comfort zone with line
breaks. That could be a poem with very long lines, or very
short lines. Or a poem that blends the two. "
Now
this is not my normal form of poetry, I usually go for a formal,
traditional structure but here goes.
Night Drive
Gliding
along the road at differing speeds we go
In
that thoughtless semi-trance of motorway meditation
Bodies
responding to sat-nav prompts, minds soothed by radio
Cocooned
in our own mobile environments, auto-locomotion.
Lane
ahead closed.
The
wheels of the cars slow as the wheels in our brains turn
Possibilities
overlaying the path we expected to take
Watching
the road signs carefully, filled with the need to learn
Where
we ought to be, what actions we need to make.
Diversion.
We
merge into a single lane with a minimum of fuss
Relying
on the over-lane displays’ god-like decree
And
here he comes in the closing lane, Mister Oblivious,
He
doesn’t respond to the notices he doesn’t even see.
Yep,
smashed the cone
Into
the work zone.
Sheep-like
we bunch
Huddled
together on the slip road,
Watching
Workmen
converge on the mess
As
we crawl on our divergent path
Reluctant
to leave the show
But
knowing we have to go.
Horns
blare raucous imprecation
At
each others inattention
Cautionary
intervention
In
moments of apprehension.
A
chain of red
Lights
ahead.
Then
the diverting diversion is out of sight
And
our planned path is history,
Behind
us, swallowed by the night,
With
our future route a mystery.
We
follow the signs with increasing speed
The
herd now safely driven by sheep-dogs;
Police
cars making sure we heed
The
messages about road hogs.
Then they peal away and the mob starts to scatter
As
some race away down familiar lanes
And
others follow that recorded patter
Made by electronic guiding brains.
Made by electronic guiding brains.
On
our ways home.
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