Septolet
The septolet has fourteen words. It is broken between two stanzas that make up the fourteen words. Each stanza can have seven words each but that is not a requirement. Both stanzas deal with the same thought and create a picture. Thanks JL, for starting this.Words slide
Through my mind
Like snakes
Nothing to grip
Happy thoughts
Slip away.
How Can
My Heart Hurt
So badly
Body denies
The torment
In my mind.
That moment
When beauty
Is almost painful
Breath catches
Lest exhaling
Lets joy escape.
wow, great writing..
ReplyDeleteSo deep Penny, I feel it!
ReplyDelete♥ ஆεlεɳa ~.^
Thanks. I didn't feel I had quite got a grip on this form.
ReplyDeleteYou are doing great justice to the form Penny !!
ReplyDeleteWONDERFUL !!!